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This is very well written and is a very good start to this tale of love. I can't wait for more. It is very well written and worded. I can't think of a single thing wrong with it. I love it so far and can't wait until the next chapter. There was may one or two words that were misspelled but other than that it was very well written. She cut it off at a good point and it left me wondering what was going to happen next. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this chapter of Bad Girls Good Guys. I think everyone should read this story.
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